1. How to write paragraph with adequate
and inadequate cohesion.
Assalamualaikum, for this season I will try to explain about how
to write a paragraph that contains the contents of adequate cohesion. A good paragraph
should have cohesion and coherence in its compilation. Cohesion or commonly
called the nexus that could influence the relationship between existing
elements in the paragraph. These elements can be said with words, or sentences
with the phrase. text or a cohesive discourse means that every element of the
integrated internally in the unit. Strictly speaking, each component of the
text was born, for example, the actual words being heard or read, connected in
series. Birth of the component elements have to be mutually dependent. So, the
presence of one another's presence in accord with good form as well as its
distribution. To get a good paragraph, i.e. who have connectedness between
sentence paragraphs need a marker or conjunction. Bookmark tool or the cohesion and coherence in a paragraph
can be either words or groups of words, such as:
a.
Continuation relationship Marker, for example: and, again, and, anyway, and
more.
b.
The Bookmark relationship timeline, for example: in the past, now, now,
before, after, after, after, meanwhile, and a day later.
c.
Marker, for
example: most climax, se, and ter-.
d.
Comparison of Marker, for example: the same, like, like, bak, and the like.
e.
Contrast Markers, for example: but, even, though, and vice versa.
f.
Illustration Markers, for example: like, for example, and for example.
g.
Causal Markers, for example: because, as, and as.
h.
Conclusion Markers, for example: inference, summary, outline, and summary.
So write a paragraph with sufficient cohesion is a
paragraph linking the ideas that will be sent with the contents of paragraphs
which had been covering all aspects of the idea. While inadequate cohesion
paragraph is a paragraph that has a form of alignment but does not contain
enough content.
2. Tell more about cohesion
Cohesion
in discourse is defined as a form of structural kepaduan form sintaktikal
bonds. Anton m. Moelino (1988: 34) States that a good and whole discourse
requires a cohesive sentences. The concept of a cohesive actually refers to the
relationship of forms. It means the elements of discourse (words or phrases)
that are used to construct a discourse coupled by ECE and intact. According to
Anton m. Moelino, et al (1988: 96) in order to obtain a good discourse and
intact, then its words must be cohesive. Only with a cohesive relationship like
that is an element in the discourse can be interpreted, according to the
dependency with elements of other elements. Discourse cohesion is divided into
two aspects, i.e. grammatical and lexical cohesion cohesion.
Grammatical cohesion
means kepaduan shape according to the grammar. Lexical cohesion means kepaduan
shape according to the word.
3. Write more about the difference between
coherence and cohesion
a.
Coherence
·
Integration of the meaning
·
(chronological order), space (describing something from top to bottom or
foreground to background)
·
propositional content of texts is organized
·
Readers must also feel that sentences are not just individually clear but
constitute a unified passage focused on coherent set of ideas
b. Coherent
·
Individual
sentences can have connection within them
·
The readers must feel they move easily from one sentence to the next,
that each coheres with the one before and after.
4. Show which text or sentence that shows
adequate or inadequate cohesion on your paragraph by underlining or putting in
the table
Identification :
Hello guys,
My name is Zhera
Risma Dara. And you can call me “ Ra” or “ Zhe” and I will angry if you call me
with “Nzer”. Aaah I dislike about it!
Description
:
How about
My live? Well I live in Yukum Jaya,
central of Lampung.
I was born
on 15 september 1994, and now I was nineteen years old. So, I was at the
University of muhammadiyah in fourth semester. My father’s name is Supardi, and my mother’s name is
Marnun. They work as labour. I really love them. Because they are always work
hard for me.
I have
medium body posture. my skin is brown, usuall nose, chinks eyes and thin lips.
My height is around 157 cm and my weight is around 43kg. I have a long hair, but now I am
more often use a hijab. Because I know if in Moeslim Religion, all of women
should use hijab for closed their hair. I love the color purple and pink. Why?
because pink is a bright color to my skin.
In astrology, the Zodiac is virgo and I had a
critical nature, honest, likes to come clean and light hand. Discipline and
always do it with conscientious, perfectionist. I really dislike the people which is
strange. as like a lie, cheat, do not appreciate others, arrogant and haughty,
arrogant in terms of lessons learned, and others.
As for the
hobby that I have, namely in the field of sports and games, if a talk I like
badminton. But my lack
of organization in the field of it, I really was difficult to adapt to the new
environment, especially in formal organizations such as BEM and others on my
campus.
When spare time activity that I normally do is
online, for example opening the facebook and twitter. To entertain my brain a little
bit after some time through many activities a day which is pretty solid.
Note : The
different color of black font with underlining shows adequate cohesion.
5. You should explain why your text or
sentence that you underline is categorized into cohesion
After I showed the
sentence or text included the categorized into cohesion above . Then I am going
to explain why my text or sentence that I underline is categorized into
cohesion . First, My paragraph on there relationship timeline markers, for
example: Now (in a sentence “I
was born on 15 september 1994, and now I was nineteen years old” and now I
was nineteen years old” and
now
is the relationship timeline, as I explained earlier).
In
addition, there is also a marker for instance: the continuation of the relationship and (in a sentence“My height is around 157 cm and my weight is around
43kg” ). and Illustration bookmarks, for example: like, for example, and for example (found in the sentence “When spare time activity that I normally
do is online, for
example opening the facebook and twitter”).
