Writing Class : Meeting 4 ( Identifying narrative paragraph with and without topic sentence )

My Failure, to be a famous photographer

Being a photographer? Yes, that was my dream since childhood. Take a picture with good, appropriate, and coloring objects the support the level of achievement of a photographer. Not only that, a photographer of course should have a camera that supports. Isn't it so? Yes! That's one reason that is preventing me to defer my dreams of being a photographer, hehe. And this one example of a failure in my life. In addition, I have experience about the failure of my life about my dream to become a photographer.

Here's the story ...

          Two years ago, when I was in the third grade of high school. I have the desire to continue education to a higher level at one of the universities in jakarta with the Faculty of modelling and photography. To achieve my desire, I always try to learn in earnest. Finally, the announcement of graduation announced. And thank God I am including one of the pupils who successfully pass the national exam. It's become one of my stock to remain optimistic continuing my dream to stay enrolled at universities that I dreamed of for a long time. (orientation)

          A week after the announcement, I apply via online. Wide range of requirements has been my fill. And just stay waiting for the written and oral tests. I continue to learn and prepare themselves carefully in order to welcome the test questions. Starting from les private to study groups with your friends. And finally, any test of time to arrive. I have been ready to welcome the problems with the provision that I have as well as the prayer of both my parents. Sixty minutes has passed, that means time to work on any problem has ended. While leaving the room, I try to review the matter again in the last test to my friends. And it turns out they were having a lot of difficulty, the same is the case with me. It made me into doubt. Will I qualify for selection? Or just the opposite? I don’t know. (complication)

          A week after the test, the announcement came. Accidental announcements via online, so I can see results announcement via a computer in my home. I check the name of the participant who escaped one by one. And it turns out? My name is not listed in one of the lists of names. It makes me very disappointed. And I thought if my failures again, next? Once cannot buy the camera with its own money, it turns out I can not deepen the science of photography at the University that I dreamed about? It is make  me so sad. (complication)

          but that failure does not make me discouraged. because, although I can not enter and study at the University. I can still study in self-taught through some information or knowledge either in writing or online as it is now. and thank God I was able to become an editor, though not as a photographer. (resolution)

Analyze the text :

Theme             : My Failure

Introducing   : Two years ago, when I was in the third grade of high school. I

have the desire to continue education to a higher level at one of the universities in jakarta with the Faculty of modelling and photography. To achieve my desire, I always try to learn in earnest.

Plot                 : Forward - Back

Characters      : I, my friends (patient), My Parents (patient)

Setting           : -place           : in the School. In My Home and in the test room

                         -time            : two years ago

                         -situation      : serious

Climax            :      I check the name of the participant who escaped one by one.

And it turns out? My name is not listed in one of the lists of names. It makes me very disappointed. And I thought if my failures again, next? Once cannot buy the camera with its own money, it turns out I can not memperedalam the science of photography at the University that I dreamed about? It is membat I am very sad.

Conclution     : but that failure does not make me discouraged. because, although

I can not enter and study at the University. I can still study in self-taught through some information or knowledge either in writing or online as it is now. and thank God I was able to become an editor, though not as a photographer

The purpose of this text : to entertain the readers about my story “My Failure, to be a famous photographer”.

Note    : the underline sentences are the topic sentence.

And you can see, this is example picture of my editor design :D