Senin, 28 April 2014

Writing Class : Meeting 6 ( If I could go back in time )



If I could go back in time..
I would like to repeat a time when I was still with him . He's the first time to dye my day . Today where can feel the happiness and distress together . When I was there beside him , a heavy load feel lighter .
In the past , the first time I was afraid to go to college . You know why ? Because I think it's very creepy syudied world . And always on overload with the name of the task that very much . A few months passed . When I sat down in the second half , I met a man who had the initials * BSH * . He was on the faculty of education and teacher training as well , to be exact physics courses . Maybe it's the name future children approach or language today is * PDKT * . after me and him get to know one and other , we establish a less formal relationship .
Courtship , yes we going :D We establish this relationship about three months . And during these three months , we were pretty serious relationship . Both of our parents had already known each other . In fact often times we held a family meeting . Really happy . But the happiness did not last long . Three months in full through memories should end up with just one night only. Night where we should end this relationship . Night which is probably the most horrific night . Suddenly she sends a short message to me " our relationship has to end up here " . It made me think long message . What mistake have I done so he sent me a message like that . As it turned out , he did not like my nature too openly on social media . He did not like the relationship status listed in my social networks one on facebook or twitter . He prefers the closed nature , we only know of this relationship , and no one person who should know about our relationship . But it turns out it was too late . My nature is too open to make this relationship should end . My first relationship turns proud - proud to be stranded in the middle of the street like this .
If I could go back in time , I'd be more secretive about my love affair . I would not be too open on social media that my relationship and my partner can both last a long time later .


Senin, 21 April 2014

Writing Class : Meeting 5 ( The description of narrative text )



Nama : Zhera Risma Dara
NPM : 12340054



The description of narrative text

Narrative Text is text which describes something as imaginative or something that only a mere delusion and aim only to entertain the reader.

1. the types of Narrative Text

Narrative Text has a core story that is usually just a writer's imagination or real events captured by the author or could even merge the two. In various sources of Narrative Text can be found in the form:
a. fables (stories about animals that behave like humans are depicted)
b. fairy stories (stories of the fantastic nature, full of wonders)
c. mysteries
d. science fiction
e. romances
f. horror stories
g. legends
h. historical narratives
i. personal experience (personal experience)
j. ballads (ballad, a story that can move readers, usually in the form of a love story that it was not until)

2. Generic Structure Narrative Text

In the Narrative Text, the order is as follows:
1. Orientation
At the Orientation or introduction of introduction of the characters in the story as well as the time and place of its occurrence.

2. Complication
On the Complication of an overview to the emergence of a crisis or problem in natural by the story that needs to be solved.

3. Resolution
The Resolution describes how baigan character from the story to solve problems that exist on the Complication.

On some references about Narrative Text, there is an additional generic structure in Narrative Text, namely the addition of a Coda after a Resoultion. So the order of Narrative text is Orientiation, Complication, Resolution and Coda.

3. Literary characteristics of Narrative Text

a. using a Simple Past Tense sentence patterns
b. usually begins with an adverb of time (Adverbs of Time). Such as: a long time ago ..., once, one, once upon a time.

how to differ from other writing genres

how to differ narrative text with other text is the generic structure of each text. for example, in narrative text there is a generic structure with different report text. as we know, the generic structure of narrative text is an orientation, complication, resolution, and sometimes there is a coda. While the report text has a generic structure such as orientation, event and the re-orientation.
And communicative purpose of Narrative Text as described is to entertain listeners or readers about a story or stories the past borne with real experience, the fantasy or strange events leading
to a crisis, which ultimately found a settlement. is different from the report text is a text that tells a story, action or activities.

the steps how to make a narrative writing

Here's an easy way to make Narrative Text.

1. specify the protagonist (main characters). The main character in can be animal or human preferences.
2. specify the setting of the time and place (the setting of the time and place).
3. specify the problems that will be faced by the main character (complication). The problems encountered can be more than one problem.
4. specify the resolution of the issues facing the main character (resolution).

Create a draft of a story based on the above steps then developed according to your own language.


 Example of Narrative Text :


My Failure, to be a famous photographer


Being a photographer? Yes, that was my dream since childhood. Take a picture with good, appropriate, and coloring objects the support the level of achievement of a photographer. Not only that, a photographer of course should have a camera that supports. Isn't it so? Yes! That's one reason that is preventing me to defer my dreams of being a photographer, hehe. And this one example of a failure in my life. In addition, I have experience about the failure of my life about my dream to become a photographer.
Here's the story ...
          Two years ago, when I was in the third grade of high school. I have the desire to continue education to a higher level at one of the universities in jakarta with the Faculty of modelling and photography. To achieve my desire, I always try to learn in earnest. Finally, the announcement of graduation announced. And thank God I am including one of the pupils who successfully pass the national exam. It's become one of my stock to remain optimistic continuing my dream to stay enrolled at universities that I dreamed of for a long time. (orientation)
          A week after the announcement, I apply via online. Wide range of requirements has been my fill. And just stay waiting for the written and oral tests. I continue to learn and prepare themselves carefully in order to welcome the test questions. Starting from les private to study groups with your friends. And finally, any test of time to arrive. I have been ready to welcome the problems with the provision that I have as well as the prayer of both my parents. Sixty minutes has passed, that means time to work on any problem has ended. While leaving the room, I try to review the matter again in the last test to my friends. And it turns out they were having a lot of difficulty, the same is the case with me. It made me into doubt. Will I qualify for selection? Or just the opposite? I don’t know. (complication)
          A week after the test, the announcement came. Accidental announcements via online, so I can see results announcement via a computer in my home. I check the name of the participant who escaped one by one. And it turns out? My name is not listed in one of the lists of names. It makes me very disappointed. And I thought if my failures again, next? Once cannot buy the camera with its own money, it turns out I can not deepen the science of photography at the University that I dreamed about? It is make  me so sad. (complication)
          but that failure does not make me discouraged. because, although I can not enter and study at the University. I can still study in self-taught through some information or knowledge either in writing or online as it is now. and thank God I was able to become an editor, though not as a photographer. (resolution)

Analyze the text :

Theme             : My Failure

Introducing   : Two years ago, when I was in the third grade of high school. I
have the desire to continue education to a higher level at one of the universities in jakarta with the Faculty of modelling and photography. To achieve my desire, I always try to learn in earnest.
Plot                 : Forward - Back
Characters      : I, my friends (patient), My Parents (patient)
Setting           : -place           : in the School. In My Home and in the test room
                         -time            : two years ago
                         -situation      : serious

Climax            :      I check the name of the participant who escaped one by one.
And it turns out? My name is not listed in one of the lists of names. It makes me very disappointed. And I thought if my failures again, next? Once cannot buy the camera with its own money, it turns out I can not memperedalam the science of photography at the University that I dreamed about? It is membat I am very sad.


Conclution     : but that failure does not make me discouraged. because, although
I can not enter and study at the University. I can still study in self-taught through some information or knowledge either in writing or online as it is now. and thank God I was able to become an editor, though not as a photographer
The purpose of this text : to entertain the readers about my story “My Failure, to be a famous photographer”.

Note    : the underline sentences are the topic sentence.

Senin, 07 April 2014

Writing Class : Meeting 4 ( Identifying narrative paragraph with and without topic sentence )



My Failure, to be a famous photographer


Being a photographer? Yes, that was my dream since childhood. Take a picture with good, appropriate, and coloring objects the support the level of achievement of a photographer. Not only that, a photographer of course should have a camera that supports. Isn't it so? Yes! That's one reason that is preventing me to defer my dreams of being a photographer, hehe. And this one example of a failure in my life. In addition, I have experience about the failure of my life about my dream to become a photographer.
Here's the story ...
          Two years ago, when I was in the third grade of high school. I have the desire to continue education to a higher level at one of the universities in jakarta with the Faculty of modelling and photography. To achieve my desire, I always try to learn in earnest. Finally, the announcement of graduation announced. And thank God I am including one of the pupils who successfully pass the national exam. It's become one of my stock to remain optimistic continuing my dream to stay enrolled at universities that I dreamed of for a long time. (orientation)
          A week after the announcement, I apply via online. Wide range of requirements has been my fill. And just stay waiting for the written and oral tests. I continue to learn and prepare themselves carefully in order to welcome the test questions. Starting from les private to study groups with your friends. And finally, any test of time to arrive. I have been ready to welcome the problems with the provision that I have as well as the prayer of both my parents. Sixty minutes has passed, that means time to work on any problem has ended. While leaving the room, I try to review the matter again in the last test to my friends. And it turns out they were having a lot of difficulty, the same is the case with me. It made me into doubt. Will I qualify for selection? Or just the opposite? I don’t know. (complication)
          A week after the test, the announcement came. Accidental announcements via online, so I can see results announcement via a computer in my home. I check the name of the participant who escaped one by one. And it turns out? My name is not listed in one of the lists of names. It makes me very disappointed. And I thought if my failures again, next? Once cannot buy the camera with its own money, it turns out I can not deepen the science of photography at the University that I dreamed about? It is make  me so sad. (complication)
          but that failure does not make me discouraged. because, although I can not enter and study at the University. I can still study in self-taught through some information or knowledge either in writing or online as it is now. and thank God I was able to become an editor, though not as a photographer. (resolution)

Analyze the text :

Theme             : My Failure

Introducing   : Two years ago, when I was in the third grade of high school. I
have the desire to continue education to a higher level at one of the universities in jakarta with the Faculty of modelling and photography. To achieve my desire, I always try to learn in earnest.
Plot                 : Forward - Back
Characters      : I, my friends (patient), My Parents (patient)
Setting           : -place           : in the School. In My Home and in the test room
                         -time            : two years ago
                         -situation      : serious

Climax            :      I check the name of the participant who escaped one by one.
And it turns out? My name is not listed in one of the lists of names. It makes me very disappointed. And I thought if my failures again, next? Once cannot buy the camera with its own money, it turns out I can not memperedalam the science of photography at the University that I dreamed about? It is membat I am very sad.


Conclution     : but that failure does not make me discouraged. because, although
I can not enter and study at the University. I can still study in self-taught through some information or knowledge either in writing or online as it is now. and thank God I was able to become an editor, though not as a photographer
The purpose of this text : to entertain the readers about my story “My Failure, to be a famous photographer”.

Note    : the underline sentences are the topic sentence.

And you can see, this is example picture of my editor design :D